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+ Just Stay Away + by ~NurikoOutlaw:iconNurikoOutlaw:





I know you're my dearest and most precious friend,
And any of my possesions I would without thought lend.
Sometimes I feel invisible to your side,
Oh believe me I am certainly not trying to hide.

It is without second thought,
That my own unhappiness is what our friendship brought.
Harsh words I realize now that I say,
I shall try to keep our friendship through whatever comes our way.

I only reveal my deepest and sincerest secrets to you,
And you have proven trustworthy to the end through and through.

Jealousy rears it's ugly head,
As I see that everyone falls at your feet and laugh at whatever you said.
Even someone who you said to be mine,
You impressed by showing more humor and shine,
To him you seem as of the finest wine.

An endless cup of love and fun you are,
Which is why some can never see us apart too far.
Twins we are you and I,
Why one falls another takes to the skies.
I am darkness and you are the pure light,
We are doomed forever to an endless fight.

I love you more as a sister day by day,
So now I say come what may.
I will not let our friendship die over an insignificant other,
Cause we'll always have eachother.....

So I tell you now just stay away,
I don't want you to stay.
You bring sorrow and tears,
You open up all of my deepest fears.......
Just stay away.......
©2004-2010 ~NurikoOutlaw
:iconnurikooutlaw:

Author's Comments

Well, I just started writing poetry lately to let out all of my stress and anger. *sniffles* ^^; And this is really bad so please don't critique to harshly....or you can go ahead.

This was done specifically for lostvietaznsoul's peice [link] .

Well there......that's mostly all the last of my anger......

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:iconlostvietaznsoul:
:hug: I think I understand what's going on here...but I don't understand why you'd have such a strong inferiority complex..............
:icontalisx:
*huggles* Feel better, okay?

--
Goonies never say die!
Believe in yourself, and in Kung Fu.
:iconnurikooutlaw:
I'll try.....it take time, I guess. =(
:iconnurikooutlaw:
Iunno....it's there and always will be forever more.
:icontalisx:
*hugs* lemme know if you ever need someone to talk to.

--
Goonies never say die!
Believe in yourself, and in Kung Fu.
:iconnurikooutlaw:
Thank you.....I will...:hug:
:iconlarukulover:
aww, such intense feelings...
**hugs**
Please feel better soon...
=(
I don't want to see my friend be sad...
:iconnurikooutlaw:
Yeah...^^; It kinda just poured out of me all at once....I wasn't even thinking about doing poems. I guess that's the only way for me to get them out now-a-days....

I will! =) Awww.....thank you....:cling:
:iconlarukulover:
No problems...
^^

I get like that, too...
but it seems I can't write poems any more so I just kinda keep it all inside and then start acting snappy and anti-social and people just get annoyed with me and make me feel worse...
XD

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